[El Muffin]

now that im ona laptop..i can get at this


Alvin's known to pm for votes, that's sleazy bro
Stays doing shady shit, he couldnt be a stand up guy at a Yeezy show
(decent open)
Youre dying to be me, maybe in another life
I fathered your style, youre just Pan trying to stab me with a butter knife
(ok)
Sho's scrawny, one look at the faggot I can tell that he cant brawl
Doesnt know if he wants to be Chief Keef, Tyga or a Raggedy Anne doll
(nice)
Ive seen the videos with the fake guns, youre on some sucker shit
U walk with so much of a switch, Adrian Peterson could beat his son with it
(nice)
Sho, If your crew ever gets signed, then nigga its luck
Why spell Squadd with 2d's when you guys are one dimensional as fuck?
(ok)
The Planes couldve been the next Dohpe, maybe Im not thinking right
But its pretty ironic how Sho getting high stopped us from ever taking flight
(lol)
We beat these addicts so many times I stopped trying to keep tab
Its straight to Vegas after this, we'll be at Rehab while u guys are in rehab
(nah)

straight segment..nothing too overwhelming..only line I didn't rly like was the closer..the rest was ok tonice





Quote:
Originally Posted by Murda Sho
Well I know I read it... I'm too conceited to not read mags with my name in it

Sho I don't read mags but the ppl adore me, maggot
Yea u Conceited.. aka a 5 foot black rapper who's also a corny faggot
(ha)
Karp we seen the jersey but u don't play ball or kick it son
You only be hearing ''Hut Hut Hut!'' because ya girlfriend lives in one
(playyyyed..I had concept like this back in 08 @rm)
Maaan those tattoos. Bad news.. it's shitty fam
I'm talkin' about how wack Murda Ink is, guess u can call me a 50 fan
(pretty cool)
i'ma bury you in the Graveyard for all of ya recent shit
we'll see A Walk Among the Tombstones. & I ain't talking no Neeson Flick
(eh)
On Illesty I beat Sho's crew & he emerged as a joke
.. & now it's like i'm doing Doughnuts how that entire Circle is Smoke
(pretty good)
They still remember our old verses cuz we're better, fact..
Ur lines fade after a wk or 2. Y'all r Global Ambassadors for Henna Tats
(nice)
They say I'm oldschool w/ the hits when I post drops
Ima put an Axe to this Square head.. now that's a Chip off the Old Block
(cool close)

similar results..mebe 1 o2 lines I absolutely didn't like the rest was ok to nice



Now the plan's to conquer, with grown up bars that have to land & slaughter
Grab revolvers & get Chocolate wasted like Adam Sandler's daughter
(nice open)
Kar’s been holding down the team and he was quick to have that voiced
Homey you might be the Anchorman but even Ron knows Milk was a bad choice
(cool)
I'd beat Orc's face in with my fists while they're bare till they're drippin wet
His eyes'll be where the ice is so much they'd be America's biggest threat
(no)
Orc why the fuck you always call Butler out like you’re the damn champ?
Stick to ya man cramps, only time we’ll see Burd above But is ya tramp stamp
(lol)
King's a clown & bitch, showing all tough & writing rounds for shit
While Orc hits the town with men blowin out bucks worst than the Falcons did
(nice)
What's ferris wheel take u on a ride clear to hell don't be scared to bail
Cause while he horses around all u'll get from battling us carousel's
(decent)
Orc reminds me of B Rabbit cuz he grew up with the same trash
Both wanted to be rappers & his mom slept with kids in his same class
(nice)
Shoulda named yall Milfs, shit all I gotta do is call that dame to pipe
I’d bag her easy and have that Cougar all over Kar like it's Talladega Nights
(cool)
You're queens of this sport, in Planes we were cool now I don't team up with dorks
I'm ready to get rid of Kar so much this battle was almost me vs Orc
(ok)
Irish faggot, his heritage is dying rapid and the shits ugly
Shit I bet you watch the Brady bunch Potato sack race & get hungry
(decent)
These damn average lames will get scored on when we clap macs & tre's
Y'all better play some D MC or u're gonna end up like Jam Master J
(nice)
Ask sho we strapped though, no games you’ll see how I do
Orc wears the tights so shit we’ll have more dots on yall than a CGI shoot
(ok)

the last 6 were ok.


iono this was close

mc were consistent but I think that verse sho dropped had the heavier lines overall tbh

like the hits were better for the most part

v/np