I'm voting CK
On first reading... It's so dense that the mind just wants to.. lol... go numb. I think you have to allow breathing room. So honestly I stopped paying attention for a while and skipped to KK.
And with KK... the structure man.. it was a turn off to. These verses were not that easy to get into. But I persevered. Since you guys gave the effort so would I.
What it boils down to me is on merits.
It feels like KK tried to ... fast talk me, into believing there was a grand story being told.. with some certain words or phrases... but when I really looked at the substance it didn't really have much but the surface.
Now CK... there was a lot of intricate stuff, real subtle stuff... and also having to contend with the perspective shifts, you really flooded me and I had to go back and slow down and read slower... but then it all started to emerge.
"Neglected like copra, my coconut’s turned to chocha"
Case in point, at first I didn't know what the fuck was going... but then after rereading, it was like I had my 3d glasses on.
Vote CK - offered me a meal... that I had to chew on, but it's more filling.... KK to me gave me soup with some interesting flavors.
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