Vote on one of these battles, and I'll return the feedback on a verse of your choosing. Vote on both, and I'll give you a full-scale breakdown.
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NYCSPITZ, you don't value my feedback anyway, but if you'd like some, leave a link.
Here are the battles between 14-line verses:
kannon vs. Darth Yoda
Eŋg vs. Soulstice