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Old 04-03-2013, 06:46 PM   #10
Frank
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Subtly subversive, feels coated in goblets of Slime.
Ren and Stimpy, anyone? Even a young Cake knew something was wrong.
And now I can log onto 4chan and watch them fucking a dog (srs)
These lazy afternoons are personal problem now.

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Run on sentence caught on the thread of kidhood's essence-
Stretching end to end, cup-to-cup whispers stringing July nights in summer,
Crushed five-hundred miles an hour on Kings, by the eyes of my brother-
Laughed at Real Monsters from the edge of my bed. No fear, just what was ahead.
So much awesome in a year or ten,
Childhood went to syndication. Erased without a complaint,
Fell headfirst into attention deficits, blame the cartoony pencil lead sketches
That bled every measure of emptiness in the margins of the present.
Eight, by eleven.

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