This is a great piece of writing, in the realm of this 'artform'. I apologize for not writing for this collaboration. It's just a very difficult verse to riff off of. As has already been mentioned here, it's all over the place, purposefully. But the mechanics are just top notch. Arguably the best I've read from you from that stand point. Lines just a touch shorter, and almost every rhyme trick in the repertoire put on display. Just a consistently high level of quality throughout, but especially in the first verse. As with all your 'wtf's he talking about' pieces, it's lost on me but there are single lines, bars, and sections that are stand-alone dope. Short type of feed but this deserves the bump not only for it's quality but because I feel a bit shitty for stringing out the collab.
Thanks for the read. Maybe I'll write for the next attempt.
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