[PancakeBrah]

"She’s all that you need, and more that you don’t.
She’s always evoked both laughter and hatred -
but proved the fork in the road to each path that I’ve taken."

Nice. Although I think 'and' would've been better than 'but'?

"I suppose she’s used to them walking all over her now.

Kind of cool with knowing the twist.

I much preferred this to "Unfurgettable". I still don't like twists but here it was obvious what you were actually talking about halfway through the verse (even without the picture). Plus your reputation with twists makes the reader prepared to look for double meanings from the jump. But what made this piece better was the writing itself. A bit more natural, better rhymes. And the metaphor, while done before, was crisply executed. Good read.

keep that pencil strokin'!