I see you didn't take my advice about taking time on your drops and not posting one every few days. Fuck me, right? The truth is, this isn't good. Whenever I think that maybe you're about to say something cool, you fuck it up with poor wording. This is why I said reread over your verse a couple of times and you will find what sticks out in a bad way, and then you fix it. It's not complicated. Yes, you are blacklisted partially because of your reputation as...well, as you lol, but the other half of that rep was earned by you sucking tremendously. Ask yourself, why would someone want to take time out of their day to read something that they don't like especially if that person just threw it together on a whim? You CAN improve that part of your reputation by taking your time like I've already said. If that doesn't work, then maybe this hobby isn't a hobby for you? Idk. I'm not trying to be a dick, seriously, but the best way for you to get better is for you to be hard on yourself. I can sit here all day and tell you everything that is wrong with it, but unless you see it and believe it I'm just wasting my time.
Another thing, one drop a week. When you post over and over and over, other members posts are being pushed to page 2, and once a piece goes to page 2 you can basically forget feed. Don't be that dick.
Peace.
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