best lines for me...
Or something rather, shatter teeth and invest in vulgar
threats that'll have every species impressed and bolder.
that was worded nice... as far as the content I was a lil' lost...tha whole Bee thing I get the species part you were tryna play wit' juz thought it was too abstract But as far as a story you can keep it movin' that way..
this was aight...nothin' mind blowin' but the first I checked from you...would like to see somethin a lil' more down to earth next time...maybe spice up the rhyme scheme a lil'
HoLLa
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