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Old 04-03-2013, 03:59 PM   #2
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I like the use of ellipses in this. I would like to hear this to a beat cuz i'm sure the multis are alot of fun. Again, my criticism stands, i find it hard to believe that Stan would just blast that fool in the face. Other than that the verse is pretty dope, plus the first like 10 or so lines are really memorable hot fire.
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