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Old 09-16-2014, 11:13 PM   #3
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Beat sounds pretty vintage.

Kin - Respectable verse. Not sure why you're a rapper talking about making beats though. If you wanted to appeal to an audience, talk about how much of a lyrical assailant you are, and let the listeners decide by themselves if they like the beat. Quality is very nice. Lyrics were decent.

Gritty - That horn sound in the background is too hushed, I'd like to hear it more pronounced. In text, your verse would be average, but your steadfast, aggressive delivery makes it refreshing. Similar to some members of Army of the Pharaohs, you've got gutter presence, but your lyrical depth needs work. If you can step it up in that department, more sparks are guaranteed to fly.

Cool track. I like "Stand Out" on your page. @Kin
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