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Old 09-16-2014, 05:54 AM   #30
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@Camarac: For six lines, this was good. I took the same, obvious approach to this topic, though I aimed to be a little more subtle and layered. You attack head-on at all times, though, and there was potential in that. But it needed more development. Your rhymes were strong; does that still need to be said about anything you write?

i think the fact i didnt even find time to write up ten lines speaks volumes

waaaaaayyyy too busy of late

glad i hopped out the tourney rather than no-show later on
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