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Old 09-15-2014, 04:54 PM   #15
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Liked touches opener
2nd line seemed like filler to me honestly
And the muzzle reference
Thought final destination was too old tbh
Thiught the jilty line had the wording off which took away from the
Effectiveness of it
And the killa cam punch I thought wasn't very creative and was a miss for me as well


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Everyone liked the camp shut down line but honestly
I think if he woulda used it, it woulda been labeled played
And I just want a fan of it, Apple ale was a miss to me as it
Wasn't very hard hitting IMO touch down was a miss also because his ne is too shay
So touch and that don't work ray rice was a concept that's been
Abused this week. Boo che was cool but like I said u can't have a che/shay
Wordplay and then a touch one cuz obviously one won't work .

2-1 vote. TG
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