I think Gamble had a LOT of ideas, almost too much, due to the short line lengths.
He really struggled to get it all out in so few lines.
There was nothing new here for me, personally, just a lot of regurgitated information put into rhyme form almost.
I'm also a lot older than the majority of this board so, there is that.
It wasn't a terrible verse, though for a cat who does audio, some of your lines here had entirelyyyyyyyyy too many syllables to be flowed over a beat. This being the worst offender IMHO:
Quote:
|
1st law inertia, 2nd law f=ma 3rd law equal & opposite.. 3 Laws of Motion
|
There's just way too much happening in that line to be rapped out loud, IMO.
veritas verse really picked it up, not as heavy on the overkill as Gamino here, but still pretty nice with it.
I much prefered his flow.
The 'free flow' line was real smooth.
I'm not entirely sure the two verses complimented each other, which I'd have liked, there seemed two different paces and tones to them both. Sometimes that difference can present two different sides or opposing views and ideals, but again, I don't think it did here.
I can appreciate both seperately for entirely different reasons. Not bad by any stretch though.
Keep those pens moving!