one went descriptive in their own...sense and the other... talked about it on a more emotionally connected personal level. I liked both of these verses..quite intense. my qualm with both is that eng seems to cram a bit and seems condensed at times, even though the delivery is top notch. pancake seemed a bit off center...his aim was diagonal, not vertical to the shoot. I think the usage of intense language was a bit too focused, rather than deploying some deep emotion.. solid works from both. Voting eng on a very close contested battle.
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