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Old 09-14-2014, 12:37 PM   #8
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Tough battle to pick a winner cuz HONESTLY I felt u both had strong verses. And I capitalized honestly cuz real talk some dudes on this site vote against people cuz either 1 they feel threatened by them and wanna get rid of them or 2 they just don't know how to vote. That's my opinion and fuck whoever mad about it.


beans

I fuck moms into vegetable state, I'll son ya shit weak text
& if they talk'n of a hot potato? It's gossiping about their kids recess
Enjoyable line it's decent but just needed a newer metaphor for hot potato since that's not known as a big recess game right now or if it is should uh just linked it to an article explaining it's popular and that would have made this line more effective.

I'm champ'n this tourney, this beat down won't be fun
Whip U wit the belt, so change your User Title ...to "this my only one:("
Solid line. Felt u didn't need the ellipsis but other than that solid line.


Dude you'll never shine, I hit a bitch wit hot rights
So it's no problem for potato to roger good-L's... <---& thats ya only spot light!
Best line so far, solid, just lacking in creativity

Nothing you release is positive, negative note? I punch heads
Cos we'll never see P-sacks dope unless it's failing a drug test
Nice line, pretty creative too, and it tied nameplay into the meta, good shit.

Ya posted poem was gay, even U sees that
We couldn't stomach that read, that's why U got no feed back
Line way to simple for me and I didn't think it was harsh enough to excuse its simplicity.

That shit was choppy as fuck! Ya can't cut hype with beans kid
So if U ever think you gotta edge in this? I'll use it to slice U to pieces
very nice closer. Ok metaphor, and solid punch with a good flow.




potato

ya girls tired of u fuckin her, she needs me to charge her. my sex is liver, dunny
poundin her ass out with my drum stick is all i need to energizer bunny
I get it and it's an effective line but I don't like it lol yet it's still effective and works well, especially in the imagery department.

everyday i wake up under the weather n need a pick me up to write glossy schemes
im too sick to be around you n im highly doubtful u want to end up coughy beans
Ok line just felt the coffee metaphor could have been better connected.

this sloppy feen will need rehab after i flip bars N set bombs
i wanted to show him what bein dopamine its too bad he'll inject that into his arm from heron.
Didnt like this bar nor feel it was strong because the heron line could have punched him more directly besides just insulting his intelligence

u got ko'ed by allen knight after claimin u spark infrareds like u hectic son
we never seen sunbeams but judging by ur pic u'd break the scale if u stepped on 1
Didnt like this bar at all and felt it wasn't strong due to the fact that the sunbeams part could have had a more creative insult instead of the obvious scale thing.

faggot evry bitch u picked up ended up likcin my ass sauce
im not playin no fuckin games even tho i always have bean bags toss
Didnt like the way u structured the punch and bean bags is waaaaay to obvious.

Tellem "I lost my limbs but if i show u my dick ull want it in ur mouth in a sec"
once i send them a pic of daddy long leg they start to bug out on the web
Not an effective closer, it was different for sure, but the punch was not hard hitting.


V/ Beans

Beans won more bars and did it in majority of the cats.
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