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Old 09-12-2014, 11:27 AM   #11
PotatoSackLegend
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you were an up n coming rapper 'till i up n fucking smacked you.
You are nothing special so this Jus' another battle.
what didju do last night?-
yep i guessed it you fucked another faggot..
i've broken your nose, with an orderly flow.
i introduced myself to yer girl by poking 'er throat.
this thread is open for votes but you're hoping it's closed.
nowhere here am i joking yo you're silly.
jilti you be softer than a "quiltie",
..n if i mispronounced your name, i don't feel guilty.

first bar was a blant statement if i ever seen 1 2dnd bar didnt even rhyme 3rd bar had an alright flow but nothing hit no wordplay or anything no punchline just a statement closer was pretty sad quiltie is not a good line and you seid if u mispronunced his name u dont feel guilty ok thats nice to know
feels like u just concentrated on flowin

wtf was that shit?^^ now i have to match the wackness
Freestyle was garbage, meanwhile we'd Pay to have it tossed back in
im the captain, all hands on deck. i'll just smack him
stand tall and get this action like the sixth man at practice
hit the canvas. lights out before Midnight Passes
and it's what ur girl does whenever i sit by that bitch
this a quick verse to Beat the Deadline
but i wont need to, since u already brought it 10 times
only got a minute to post, so here's the closing last key
leave him sad and weak. cuz when I give Pharrell, he won't be Happy

first bar was alright 2nd bar was nice i was feelin it with the flow too 3rd was ehhh midnight passes 4th was cool and last bar was weak could of came harder but it hink u already knew u got it didnt need to do much

v/ jilti
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