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I can kind of agree with dull boy here, at times this felt really polished and the flow was butter-like, but in patches it did feel almost thrown together on a whim. I don't know if 'uneven' is the term I'd use, but I can certainly see what he meant by that. 'Scattered' a couple people also said, and again i don't feel like that nails it completely, but yeah, it's close to the money. First thing i've read from you in months/years.

Keep that pen moving!