[Adonis]

Trap - Didn't like the GOOD life and read it twice bit. Basically an insult to readers grasp of concept as well as your writing to be honest. I loved the flow, was fairly butter. Started off dope and gradually tapered down to something between dope and above average??? Anyways, it Ironic that I didn't like the GOOD life reference because I don't think I fully get the concept. That, and to be honest I'm not hip to social media and popularity/ break ups and love affairs and shit. So I took this as literal, Kim and Kanye, the self proclaimed GOD of hip-hop, and to be fully honest, every album he solo produced or put out is pure GOLD. So in a sense, I agree, but I hate him so..... I had one HUGE quarrel with your verse though, and this is one that will actually play a part in my voting decision. "We were one and the same, sang you my sweet serenade, you deemed part of the game.....Then this...Wanted to Make her say yes...Tense change irked me something fierce. All in all, solid flow, but considering content and concept, I will say this is going to be undervalued in my vote as the route you chose just doesn't peek my interest.


Diggs - Fuck you and your chasing dragon reference. Even though you admitted that you heard it before reading that verse, I still feel like I played an integral role in a Mormon (ex), fully grasping the concept. Also I hate you for disliking my reference, yet you did the same thing only less witty. Anyways, smooth read, butter transitions and all while keeping a condensed rhyme scheme executing a rather well thought out and personable concept. You will get my vote. You wrote a touching topic, not packed with emotion, as that aspect of the verse was left to interpretation to reader considering closer, but the writing still left enough facts and imagery that I felt for the characters. Simply put, SOLID verse be it 12 or 32 lines.


Voting Kan Diggs