[Objective]

Timeless - Yo, you know you had another day to write, right? Did you just post something to show, or because you were drunk or what? Either way, the shit you posted was pretty wack. It could have been me who posted that shit son. It rhymed tho', so you got that going for you. Some weak bars all over, could have worked with some of the lines that you got and there might have been something. But as it stands now it's just too bland.

Plot - Abit more direct, looking forward to read something more refined by you but overall I thought this was decent. Then again my knowledge in battlerap is very limited, but ye, I can easily tell who I thought did the shit better though.

Vote - Plot.