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jilti · 09-10-2014, 10:18 AM

Note..

Better THINK AGAIN before he starts any ruckus, like the U.S vs. Kim Jong-un's army, you dumb fuck
You'll panic when I damage. Have this cunt Re-evaluating Motifs...a little bit of Harmony's Fucked Up
ok opener, liked the flow better than the punch
Double-Wielded Pistols will end his luck; act like a Female, A Pair'll show him the depths of Heaven, son
Get left disgusting, 'cause I Crop Tops Down to the Belly Button...like Women's Clothes at Forever 21
lol feeling this
You being hot is a Stage Act. That's your best bet at seein' Props
Your record's a freakin' flop. So, the only time we rush to buy J's is when the sneaker drops
ok
Fuck the gimmick you're rocking, dude
Fom the City of Gotham? You must be privy to fiction 'cause your identity's COMICAL
decent because the flow was on point
On a Dark Night, this Bat, Man....will get rid of this Joker
Split your face like Harvey Dent's from the acid-drip with a blow that could practically make your skull burst...
ok punch

Note-some shortening of lines would help out alot because u have the technical stuff down

Vs

J todd..

I'll bury you without a shovel, leave ya in a grave,
put your head so far underground you'd release a mixtape.
lol simple and to the point, probably lotb
Nobody wants you on the mic, so just keep silent,
this notebook profiles a creep, he dreams of a lonely island.
nope
Coming with long bars, shit concepts and vague hits bitch,
years of mental scars, a dick complex and gay wishes.
lol funny and nice flow, but closer to a miss than hit
You're like Weezy if he tried to make it on a rap forum,
you're a bad omen, killing text battles with crap torchin.
miss
I handle this bitch like I was sent by the state to terminate,
words like an axe, ripping through your face as it gurgitates.
nope

this was an enjoyable battle to read, props to both
mvgt- notebook

09-10-2014, 10:18 AM	#8
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816228	Note.. Better THINK AGAIN before he starts any ruckus, like the U.S vs. Kim Jong-un's army, you dumb fuck You'll panic when I damage. Have this cunt Re-evaluating Motifs...a little bit of Harmony's Fucked Up ok opener, liked the flow better than the punch Double-Wielded Pistols will end his luck; act like a Female, A Pair'll show him the depths of Heaven, son Get left disgusting, 'cause I Crop Tops Down to the Belly Button...like Women's Clothes at Forever 21 lol feeling this You being hot is a Stage Act. That's your best bet at seein' Props Your record's a freakin' flop. So, the only time we rush to buy J's is when the sneaker drops ok Fuck the gimmick you're rocking, dude Fom the City of Gotham? You must be privy to fiction 'cause your identity's COMICAL decent because the flow was on point On a Dark Night, this Bat, Man....will get rid of this Joker Split your face like Harvey Dent's from the acid-drip with a blow that could practically make your skull burst... ok punch Note-some shortening of lines would help out alot because u have the technical stuff down Vs J todd.. I'll bury you without a shovel, leave ya in a grave, put your head so far underground you'd release a mixtape. lol simple and to the point, probably lotb Nobody wants you on the mic, so just keep silent, this notebook profiles a creep, he dreams of a lonely island. nope Coming with long bars, shit concepts and vague hits bitch, years of mental scars, a dick complex and gay wishes. lol funny and nice flow, but closer to a miss than hit You're like Weezy if he tried to make it on a rap forum, you're a bad omen, killing text battles with crap torchin. miss I handle this bitch like I was sent by the state to terminate, words like an axe, ripping through your face as it gurgitates. nope this was an enjoyable battle to read, props to both mvgt- notebook