Now this match up is like the complete opposite of the championship match up. Will explain that right now. First off, I read this match after I constructed the magazine (because I write up the predictions and wish not to write based on what is already there). I read both verses again now before this vote. This is like the championship because on one side, there is better content with the topic & on the other side you have that real vivid imagery & a pretty deep story. Zygote, I loved your direction with this topic & liked it more than Adonis in this match. You put the focus on your character & rode us through from the gathering of his patients, to his experiments & hypothesis/conclusions... pretty cool right there. I will agree with Split in that one little section with all the high vocabulary, that was kind of jumbled, especially because your lines are short, and would've worked more if you stretched it out. Aside from that everything was on point. Not really one of the better pieces you put together though, but solid. Adonis, though content wise I felt Zy had the edge, the way you put your story together was very good. It had that poetic vibe, laced with good imagery & descriptions & these areas I felt you were better than Zy in. You told a good story, though as I mentioned before, the content wasn't too interesting. Your previous pieces had a bit more spunk on top of the great execution but this week you seemed to fall back a bit. I expected much more from both of you to be honest, but in any case this can go either way depending on the voter. I'm going to go with zygote here by a thread.
MVGT: zygote.
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