[PancakeBrah]

I liked

"Because problems are never problem’s solutions
Colossal impediments, the nuisance,
Of loving what kills you, like Golem’s confusions.
A circle, a ring, causality, a priori,
Resourceful is the king, no fallacy, amore.
[Redacted]
The emperor’s new clothes are boring."

"“there are no answers, only choices, and do you even understand?”"

"And as you rise up from your watery tomb, you understand and finally see….
That the red baron is just a dog in a place he shouldn’t be"

and strongly disliked the rest.

Like in terms of my personal assessment of you as an Open Mic writer. I thought the quoted sections where better than my preconceptions of you. The rest fit right into them.

Keep that quill metriculatin'!