Pretty dope match up here for the title. Red, I read your a piece a few times just to get a better grasp of it. Now that's not a bad thing. It's actually good because your content I actually favored a bit over Frank. It's one of those pieces that makes me think a bit more, good entertainment value. Was this better than some of your previous drops? Not so much. I felt it started off a bit slow, and that is because of all those damn semi-colons lol, which for myself, kind of made it difficult to read in the early part of your verse. It's actually towards the middle where things really started kicking off properly. I most certainly seemed as if you were emulating Frank a bit with that end rhyme scheme thing (though the style you wrote emulates Blacketh's more), which is pretty cool. But it would have worked more if you were able to lace together strong imagery & detail like Frank does. Frank, I see why you're champion of this league. You continue to shine each & every week pretty effortlessly. I'm starting to wonder if you can actually keep this up- and it's highly possible. I preferred Red's content a bit more than yours, but what I feel propelled you in this match was the imagery & descriptions, which almost every voter I'm sure touched on. From start to finish it was there. I honestly never read a verse that packed in soo much imagery with such attention to detail. I felt your verse was more mechanically better on top of the nice execution of that scheme you are so good at putting together. A pretty good title match, though I feel Frank dominated in more areas over Red, both of you did a excellent job of taking the topic in different directions, but Frank just had it this week.
MVGT: Frank.
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