Soulstice painted a picture with his words and articulation of the subject. imagery resonated the further along the story went. Flow was on point also.
Pent had good metaphors. 2nd half of verse was definitely stronger than first half, but it never pulled me in as a reader. Where Soulstice verse made me want to read it again.
Goodluck to whoever advances
Vote = Soulstice
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