zen:
Dude your structure is always flawless.. i mean no one brings it in as close as you do like 1 _ 1 as a constant generic base, keyword constant and then your advance on it wildly always keeping the same rhythm..
I'm savage. Insane. An addict contained in a cavern of brains.'
wow.. that is sick dude..
hey story wise ok, vocab hot as always and your character name "obnoxious dave" that was highly humorous to me the whole time.. Nice piece..
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You think YOU'RE sick
I shit cough drops
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