5- I liked the slippers and dress line (guess I'm the only one that chuckled when I read it), I liked the Bruisin/asian eyes line.The dick line was awkward....very awkward....I cringe when guys go there in their verses towards another guy.The rest of the lines like L and the sports reference didn't go over so well.
Bob-I aint gonna front...I kinda dug all of your lines. They wasn't like soopah punches but they all seem to land pretty much. Scratch that....the Dog/salt swing didn't go anywhere. But all in all...your piece was cool.
V- Bob
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