Good conceptualization. Mike Wrecka did his thing, and Pancake as well. Pancake took a direct focus and turned it into a very supportive writing, riddled with supportive words, and a nice influx of description. I think that was quite alright. Mike Wrecka had a ongoing battering of his own protocol and it worked out well. It was alright, but it lingered over the finale of the topic too much. Voting Pancake
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