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Old 04-02-2013, 05:15 PM   #13
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Veritas - Verse had all the elements - left no stone unturned. This was sweeping saga lol. You swept the dirt from under the rug. I am unaware of some of the shit you spoke of; you dropped knowledge with this one. You had a Krs 1 Cadence. Preachy educational whos your daddy - Big brother would be proud.

Ink - The personifier. First time you centered your verse and it doesn't work for you on this piece. I have high expectations of centered verses. Was this centered to make up for lack of?

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