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Old 09-06-2014, 02:41 AM   #4
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just got off work and saw his verse.. damn that's a lot of words
not a solid structure or Set-up, but woulda helped to start off with one first
so @Paradigm close this thread. he's in wayy over his head
i asked for 10 lines, he went OM and posted a whole story instead
shit bored me to death. three-quarters of it was a snore fest
the other fourth read so bad my phone app tried performin tests to decode it
must be tone deaf the way ur rhyme patterns makes no sense
but if dude hard of hearing now, wait til his ear Canal drowns when he's thrown in
we're grown men. lets talk it out cuz its all about showing respect
plus your a texter newbs can Model themselves after, since u Pose no threat

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