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NYCSPITZ · 04-02-2013, 04:45 PM

I liked both but Red glare's seemed a bit more fragmented to me and some of the transitions weren't smooth...some of the elements seemed to pop out of nowhere but still a cool read. Frank had a better verse, it had better storytelling and everything fit under an overarching theme that was easy to follow and thus enjoyable.

v/ frank

04-02-2013, 04:45 PM	#16
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	I liked both but Red glare's seemed a bit more fragmented to me and some of the transitions weren't smooth...some of the elements seemed to pop out of nowhere but still a cool read. Frank had a better verse, it had better storytelling and everything fit under an overarching theme that was easy to follow and thus enjoyable. v/ frank