Pancake - I had you as a strong favorite to win this tourney from the get go and this verse is a perfect example of why. Your knack for characterizing so efficiently gives you an edge due to the length limit in the earlier rounds. I appreciate how the verses ended, it was like breaking the 4th wall moment that eclipsed the rest of the verse perfectly.
Mike - I was wondering when someone would utilize the line limit for some technical flair. Loved it. My biggest grievance here is it felt like a cheap attempt at working with the topic. The verse itself was one dimensional, effective at getting a point across but not much that was engaging
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Last edited by Pent uP; 09-05-2014 at 05:15 AM.
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