Netcees - View Single Post - Round 2: 5. kannon vs. 13 jilti \\ kannon wins 7-1

Pent uP · 09-05-2014, 05:02 AM

J - On some chyea and born again cross over. It kinda was what it was, didnt feel like a verse with layered purposes or vehicles, and didnt offer any free thought from the direction. It was just a here it is kinda verse with solid mechanics

Kan - I like how u (inadvertently?) Played off your opponents structure. The hip hop roots as a vehicle for explaining a simple situation was a refreshing yet familiar thing to come up to. The strength of this verse lies within the how it was told as opposed to what was told. Solid showing.

Vote - Kan

09-05-2014, 05:02 AM	#4
Pent uP Robin Williams of Fallen Victims Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 1,499 Battle Record: 25-11 Accomplishments - NC Hall of Fame Champed - Netcees Writers League (2x) - NWL Season 1 - Write Night I - Art of Writing League (2x) - Write Week IV Rep Power: 6862275	J - On some chyea and born again cross over. It kinda was what it was, didnt feel like a verse with layered purposes or vehicles, and didnt offer any free thought from the direction. It was just a here it is kinda verse with solid mechanics Kan - I like how u (inadvertently?) Played off your opponents structure. The hip hop roots as a vehicle for explaining a simple situation was a refreshing yet familiar thing to come up to. The strength of this verse lies within the how it was told as opposed to what was told. Solid showing. Vote - Kan Last edited by Pent uP; 09-05-2014 at 05:06 AM.