I respect your thoughts, I think you're overestimating my intentions with this piece and with most of my work. This was purposefully abstract and out of whack, and it only came together somewhat at the end cohesively because I changed the tempo to end it with finality. There is no overall metaphor for this piece, rather I'm playing with the concept of air travel, planes, vortexes and air space, and seeing all the wild things I can do with it. I'm more of an "enjoy the ride, and the rhymes" type of writer when I'm not doing topicals and actually putting effort into making sense with what I write. Other times, this is how I get my adrenaline pumping - by being as random as possible but trying to make machine gun fire come off elegantly.
You're right about people not knowing how to respond to this kind of stuff though, I get responses like this sometimes. My intention is mainly to pepper your mind frame with as much interesting information as possible to get you thinking, to get your blood pumping. That's my main purpose when I do abstract writing, to de-mystify the Vulgar effect.
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