I saw this battle was 3 way - My first thought was "I love a good ol ruckus"*
Mac saw this battle got excited, now lottos hiding cus mac wants to fuck us
^yeah, this is kinda played, since it's a pretty obvious concept. try to stay away from those
Really??? I already beat Lotto...And Mac is my first league assignment!?!?!?
Easy! Together there winning experience is shorter than an il nik a retirement!!
^decent
Ill leave both of yall hiding, youll be changing your names next!
One too MC "Lotto punches dont connect" - the other - MC "No clue on concepts"
^uhm yeah, this wasn't delivered badly, but the concept was kinda basic.
Ill slap that sleezy cheesy smirk of lottos face, this match to me is a breeze.
With the heat im bringing im cooking emcees, so im serving mac an cheese
^i see the wordplay, but the bar lacked direction. try and focus your bar on your concept more
lotto went to ground first an macs next to get zero votes, so mac cowers
Both your reps going to smash the ground quicker then the fuckin twin towers
^don't bold. either a concept is there and we'll see it or it's too forced and you shouldn't use it in the 1st place. again, this felt a little old
Listen faggots, this text lark aint something you learn, having natural skill is vital!
Closest you two will ever get to me - is having your names with mine in the title!
^this wasn't bad. still a kinda obvious concept, but personally, i haven't seen it yet, so you get the benefit
You two the worst ive seen and ive been on LA so take that into perspective!
You two arn't just bad your its definition in adjective - of poor quality; inferior or defective
^nah. & don't explain things. it's the same as w/ bolding. either it's something obvious like LA being lyricalassault which we'll understand of course or it's way too forced and shouldn't be used either way.
vs.
Jimbo the feminine type he uses maybelline n rimmel,fags so ugly its a disgrace
But he never puts mac on his face.. except for when he takes him back to his place
^nice
This one's to snoop.. i fucking hate you dude, God damn it
I dont care if they got a troubled marriage, I didn't want in the 3 sum they was plannin
^yea, kinda played
I wanted a challenge, you know someone dope & tight
but these two mount a lyrical assault..n get laughed at like there from that site
^decent. kinda basic tho
Jimbo wanna fight? you had some speed cola explains why you so quick to blast off
But Im the Juggernaut, i aint worried He'll never packapunch even playing black ops
^decent
Jimbo is mad soft & Mac has no creativity, you think they winning you must be kidding me
Ill put mac in a box n send him out by parcel force.. Only way he'll have some good delivery
^decent again.
Jim's jobs aint a mystery, he has super skills as a painter n gets jobs by the bunches
I mean hes been 'decorating' his verses n convincing voters that it actually has punches
^decent. coulda been a hit harsher delivery
ya on the wrong site? Stop tryna be a matching suit with orc,your sexuality makes me think
But im a helpful guy, so ill waste a line to help you find the right one so i provided you a link
^nah, you know this wasn't good
jimbo, you need to think outside of the box more. you know what a punch is and you know how to word one, but your concept are a bit basic. lotto, it's kinda the same w/ you. at times, you just don't care enough. most of your bars could be really good if you spent a little more time on 'em. but you got this. you had the lotb w/ your opener and some other decent lines, which you had more of than jimb.
v/lotto
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