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Old 09-02-2014, 12:58 PM   #6
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I liked both. Note had a pretty decent bar. I thought his wording probably could have been better. But we all have our own styles and can recognize how I write or what I prefer shouldn't be a benchmark for others to reach for. Therefore the wording issues are probably just due to my preference. I liked the reference and the np. I thought Camp's was better. Not a big fan of green environmentalist bullshit lmao but yeah I thought the set up, np, and delivery was admirable.

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