This was another difficult one to judge bc it's hard to get into alot of variations of Broke np/wp for obvious reasons, lol. Although this had nothing to do with me, I guess I did like the np itself. I thought it was worded smoother and with a much fresher, crisper delivery than Kin's. However Kin's greatest attribute was the attention he paid to the entire concept. His first line perfectly set up the closer. Although one could say the Roar np is redundant, it wasn't the best part of his bar. His concept and all the supportive material that went into the concept really hammered the np through.
Close battle. But I have Kin winning this.
v-Kin
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