Not a bad battle at all to read.
Bar 1: I enjoyed Namean's bar more and felt it was set up a bit fresher & executed. The karate line from Jilt is too played IMO and the flow suffered a bit when he added the inner rhyme of kenpo demo.
Bar 2: Tight ass bar from Jilt right here! I enjoyed it and felt it was well set up, stung, had nameplay involved, and the connectivity between the lines was dope. Namean I felt u dropped a level with this bar and I felt the doubt fire line was too played.
Bar 3: Jilt took this bar as well, even though it wasn't as fresh or strong as bar 2, it had more complexity and was a more impactful line overall than Namean.
Bar 4: I like Jilt bar here better. Seemed like Namean upped his level a bit in power for this punch, but I still think Jilt took it with more sting.
Bar 5: This was a disappointing closer IMO from jilt as he had some pretty solid bars up to this point. He was going for humor but the comedy fell flat for me. I think Namean's bar had more effective connectivity and was better just by a hair.
So I got this 3 bars to 2 Jilt.
V/ Jilt
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