OpticNoodle5.
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So from his pulpit our fine emperor summons his cavalry
Bastards, tattered armor, battle-scarred and numb from the savagery
Succumbing to majesty, taking orders at the tap of a sceptre
Practicing two-step defense, memorizing tactical lectures
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cool verse. good lyrics. didnt really enjoy it, i'm kind of biased against ancient battle topicals.. seen em done to death. i respect what you did. didnt like the end or superimposed twist. im always guilty of doing that stuff, ironically.
Inno.
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Down each class he claims victim after victim a massacre he insists on.
No one is safe and he hasn’t missed with his pistols;
his wrists consistent with extinguishing everyone from existence.
In a blind stupor of rage John lost it all to his ignorance
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lol my character was named John this week!!!
good verse. very played. imagery was acceptable.
both of you guys came in w/ verses about where i had expected you to do... surprisingly rare occurrence, seems like one dude's always keying or one's going IN. this was nice and even. cool change. i get to put on my voter hat.
by nature of these two archetypal tales (know thats the wrong word, u know what i mean), one focuses on story and plot progression and one focuses on imagery over events. caught in the moment meets caught in the tide. Innovator did a better job combining details and imagery to build a solid story we've all already seen before. If I wasnt familiar with TD5's story type, I'd be much more lost. Innovator's works better for me on an enjoyment level independently. Mechanically was behind, but it didnt hinder it.
v/ Inno