09-01-2014, 04:04 PM
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Originally Posted by sraL
i just dont understand how these ppl are put in positions of power in things they arent even remotely good at
the only mods should be ppl the community respects
those whove earned their stripes and 'get' this board, know what makes it tick etc
mike just ticks zero boxes for me here
has he even posted a picture while were on that subject?
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Originally Posted by Brian Bryan
Chea, this is what I’m talking about!
First off LOL @ mentioning the Silk Road, it reminded me of the drug website found via Tor for my drug paraphernalia heads who know what I mean haha! I also don’t agree with what Serpent said regarding the rhymes being ‘basic’, far from it actually, I’m a huge fan of multi-strings and think as a technical aspect, when used correctly, they really help the mechanics of a verse – and sometimes flow - depending on their usage and rhyme placement. It’s a really underrated skill, and one most of us can do, but not everyone can do well. That’s the difference for me. Mike Wrecka is actually pretty dope with it, despite our earlier back and forth trollscapades, the homie definitely knows what he’s doing on this turf and always goes hard. This was no exception. The flow in the opening four was dope, felt some of the lines gradually got longer in length and syllable count as he went on, fluctuating towards the middle and end, but never to the point it was detrimental. I thought he stuck to the topic ferociously, knew how he wanted to approach this and tackled it really well. Very polished verse, drive to his writers voice which moved the piece along at pace and made what wasn’t a short read feel as though it was anyway due to this. I’m impressed. I’ve read many pieces by this guy in the past, so I can’t say I’m surprised, but dudes a problem and he showed that here. Great showing IMHO.
overall I preferred Mike’s verse in terms of his execution of the topic as a whole.
Looking forward to facing you both. :D
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/troll
oh and muff, you look like Dia
if he was sort of black and retarded
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