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Old 09-01-2014, 01:37 AM   #9
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props; very smooth. authentic.

pencil to the paper once the curtains are drawn
many tagalong and bottomfeed like urchins or moss


i like that couplet due to it's imperfect nature, but when said phonetically it can be molded into exactness. if you know what i mean.

follow my distortion like it's sermon or psalm
it's foolish now to recreate what's destined to change


i might just be a "nerd for verses", the crafting, but i kind of "read into" that a bit, seeing a double meaning which points out the changing of the end rhyme. i doubt that was your intent, but either way i thought it was cool.
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