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man this was some strong stuff. the scheme was godam dopeyour multis and pretty much every in your piece was dam near flawless
great rhyming, great imagery, dope flow it had it all. little vague as far as the story and its progression...thats the only complaint i had
for this verse...everything else is just dope man. the start of your verse was ok and towards the middle end when you start geting into
specific details is truly some dope shit..it was smooth and read as such.
frank.
same thign with you..your verse is littered with dope lines with great imagery. i like the vibe this gives man reall smooth like.
had some dope multis scattered through out and your vocab was def onpoint. as far as your content goes..you told a dope storyman
felt like the way it progressed was just effortless...it had a clear start, middle, and end with each having a great impact indivudually
that ultimatly made for a dope fucking verse...great storytelling tbh
overall
i got frank..i felt like both kids mechanically dropped some heat and no one really outshined the other in that aspect. i felt both came equal with
there skill set...but i felt like frank told a more complete welll rounded story that started great and ending in a fitting manner..red droped a dope peice
as well i just felt franks storytelling got it for him...great batttle
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