[Scripter]

I thought the piece was well structured and had a pretty good story line.

My favorite part was
"Truth is honestly a cute anomaly used so sparingly,
youth has bothered me, since it left these bones,
cold speaks to leave its simple presence known
as my prints impress the snow. Hair is thinner.
Good thing I'm fond of the air in winter."

I don't know what some people were saying... it makes perfect sense to me. Your getting older...