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kannon: I appreciate the time you took on the vote I had vs. @
Soulstice and that you posted it in here. The title I had for my verse, and what I tried to convey in the story was ''Insomnia''. It was basically the same verse I sent to Certain so I wouldn't no-show and in case I'd get some time to polish it and re-write some lines. I didn't get time to polish it but you gave me some insight on how I could improve it even further with the thoughts I had in mind on how I would originally improve it if I had the time to do so. Thanks man.
And yeah, I second MKG on the votes as well. Everyone's been on point.
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I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave,
So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave.
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