Netcees - View Single Post - Round 1: R. Cormier vs. 11. timeless \\ Cormier wins 5-0

Adonis · 08-31-2014, 12:18 PM

Times verse was a bit weird?.. But was decent writing. I didn't like the chopped sentences so much. Corm verse was just a fluid read. If this were a longer verse it would have been ass given his concept. But given the brevity, it actually worked

Vote Corm.

08-31-2014, 12:18 PM	#8
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	Times verse was a bit weird?.. But was decent writing. I didn't like the chopped sentences so much. Corm verse was just a fluid read. If this were a longer verse it would have been ass given his concept. But given the brevity, it actually worked Vote Corm. __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR