Really enjoyed nycs verse, the flow was on point throughout his while piece the vocabulary was great and was even manage to squeeze in some emotion into ten lines. Like how you didn't take the obvious approach with your piece kinda put a twist on it and you did a good job of that. Jilti I must admit yours was a bit suspenseful in the sense that I didn't know how you were gonna wrap up the piece until the last line but I must admit I was a bit disappointed I didn't like the approach you took it's like there was this big build up and once I saw phone sex I was like oh, and let down. Mechanically your verse was solid but personally I enjoys the direction in which NYC went better,
Vote NYC
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