[Mike Wrecka]

ok cool battle guys. two very different verses.

vinzr - I like your stuff. and this verse was enjoyable. you have a style that I find to be similar to my own in some ways so I vibe to it. this had good wording, but as ive said in the past your verses seem complex while seeming basic at the same time. it almost seems a little lazy in some spots. use a damn multi here and there. lol. and also take the end rhyme from a line and continue it at the beginning of the next line. ya feel me. anyway.

The air around my sparks with colors that spell the word beauty
This new image I’ve manufactured looks like it does suit me

enjoyed that line a lot. the character you described did seem a little faceless and I feel you could have lengthened your verse to more fully create the story. but ya don't wanna be negative, I really enjoyed reading it. I just tend to point out things like that while I vote. my bad


que - as I started this verse, it felt a little game of thrones ish and I really thought I was gonna hate it. well I didn't. the first few lines , some of those multis felt a little forced but ya the verse got better as it went on. this shit was aggressive as hell.

The ones that bark as if wolves were released to ravage
When Good meets the savage its too much for the meek to manage!
Happiness is mother natures weakest bandage
Were built to re-open wounds and repeat the damage!
Our greatest challenge will be to shape our talents
and invade the grey lands that create the balance!"

sick


good battle guys. thanks for the reads.

vote-que