nice battle guys. both good reads.
zygote- didn't have the insane flow you usually bring, but you did fill your verse with a ton of imagery. you described the sights, the sounds, the smells of the scenario that you brought to life so vividly. it was an interesting story and I enjoyed it thoroughly. very good work here.
Adonis- you decided to make a sequel to the verse you posted against me. not a bad idea. imo this verse wasn't nearly as descriptive and lacked the emotion of the prior episode. the flow was a little choppy in some spots, which kinda surprised the shit outta me cause that's one of your strengths usually.
I enter. Naked and bloody – Full of life,
The only scream is the machine bedside,
I could not get this line to work no matter how hard I tried. it started smoothing out later on in the verse though.
good work. it was a good story overall and had some real quotables in there but your mechanics weren't what we are used to reading from you tbh.
vote - zygote
enjoyed it more
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