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Old 08-30-2014, 10:39 PM   #5
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Timeless had an interesting concept about sexual abuse, more interesting than war to me. The writing was strange though - it wasn't quite humorous and wasn't quite serious in its tone, which I think was problematic because it never settled into itself, felt a little waffle-y. Cormier had a more realized concept and executed it better, just a notch higher with his diction. Close one, but I'm leaning towards Cormier.
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