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Old 08-30-2014, 02:27 AM   #2
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Bad quality and your jump ins are hell of obvious bro. Lyrically. Aside from audio. This was a solid verse. I liked how kept line concepts afloat a few bars later, A la, Bee/Sting if cornered. I enjoyed the writing for it was, not so much over beat, but the actual writing yes.
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