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Old 08-29-2014, 08:42 PM   #5
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ha ha dayum. these ten line pieces are insane because they really encapsulate what a writer wants to say moreso than a 500 page essay. it really does, because the moment you capture what they're talking about - that's it! but soulstice was really clever here. objective did quite alright as well! kudzu trees are sort of a *thing* of mine. the adjectives were almost a bit excessive, but i guessss you can say more is better than none. objective showed up, but it felt branded. i dont feel it never left a part of the ground. im going with soulstice. cool stuff
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